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Without You I'll Be Miserable At Best

your voice
is like a razor
and it pierces my fragile mind
stirring bittersweet memories
and those feelings that never quite go away
nowhere feels like home
when you're not around.
i need you.
my thoughts are always on you
like my favorite song
playing over and over in my head
the sweetest lullaby
memories of your face
and the way you always cared
and i pray with all i am
that those memories
never fade away
they're all i've got
now that nothing is ever
going to be the same
at least i know i can still count
on remembering your name
and all you are and were to me..
i love you.

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  • LucyLightning
    October 29, 2007
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    ilikeeeit. =D
    good job.
    thanks for entering.


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 11, 2007

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    Bravo!!!!!!!! you've captured my heart and made it scream of acertancy. Il ove the body and the title, very efective very realistic, I'm amazed, it's almost as we're in the same situation. it sucks doesn't it? to love some1 who doesn't love you. If you don't mind I'm going to add this to one of my lists.