Tenderness speaks volumes
while light dances laughter
loneliness is captured in flight
love is supreme..nature's daughter
Love fulfills what life consumes
A contest entry
- Short and meaningful by tender-butterfly.
470 points, ended September 26, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Brilliant
Thank you for this wonderful entry.
Well done and all the best to you in the contest.
Truly a write worth reading.
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Thank you so much.
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love is the reason why we are all here, from birth to death it is in our lives, flapping colourful wings
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I see your point, a good one it is. lol thanks
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The poem in entirety is splendid and does offer a lovely image of love. I particularly like the finial line, much meaning in it.
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Why thanks so much, I surely appreciate. lol
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lovely...some excellent romantic imagery here...might be one of your best pieces...bravo!
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wow, really? thanks, Iggy. lol
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