an empty bowl
and four chopsticks--
dawn light
Andrew Hide
11-09-2007
In a list
A contest entry
- The Far-Eastern Theme Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended October 10, 2007, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great haiku! Nice, clean, in the moment and an Aha moment at the end.
Good luck in this contest.
qt
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I like the images, definately eastern influence. Well Done!
Dennis
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A beautiful haiku, and a delight to read. Lovely to see one from you!
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Very well done on the theme of the contest!
All the best!
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Very simple an image and yet so deep, Andrew...Lovely writing as sparse and as full as that empty/full plate.
Thank you so much for this entry to the contest!
Jo
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it was so worth the wait ! to find a poem from you today .... so much said in so little ... i love the use of four making me pause a (short) moment to count the people and finish the story of the night in my mind ... luverly piece ... >>> Gina
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