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we drink...

we drink to ease the mind,
ease the pain?
we drink to be someone
we can't contain?

out with emotions
and in with the lust!
goodbye to the psyche,
hello to the touch!

we drink to escape
the common everyday...
we drink to explore
the girl next door,
we drink to adore
the girls we abhor

goodbye to the ones we love
and hello to the whores!

we drink to ease the mind,
ease the pain?
we drink to be someone
we can't sustain...

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  • singingfreedom
    September 11, 2007

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    Yes. A true commentary on a lot of college kids I know. I like the lines that end in question marks, especially because at first they don't seem like they should be questions, but I think it shows the uncertainty of people's reasonings of why they drink.