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dead inside

i am dead inside and
all the pain has gone away
and all i feel is a numb feeling in my legs
i cant move or talk
and every thing
is slowly fallin apart

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  • NyteShade
    September 11, 2007
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    a very powerful and emotional piece in this short poem. nicely done.