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Midnight Visit.

Once upon a moonlit night,

Three fox cubs played in sheer delight,

When mother came with that nights prey,

All four quickly dashed away.

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For the foxes in my garden!

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  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 4
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    Short and very sweet - but then glimpses of wild animals are often very fleeting


  • captain howdy
    September 12, 2007
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    how cute! I love it!


  • crimsondew silver member
    September 11, 2007
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    So cute and such a pretty picture you draw...
    All the best!


  • Melodies silver member
    September 11, 2007

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    Really cute! Could be in a storybook!