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Great Saturday Night

The moon was full
Cool breeze flowing
I looked wonderful
Felt great!
Met some friends
About ten at local bar
Drank a few
Then I saw him
He bought me a drink
I smiled thinking he is nice
We talked and drank
My friends went home
I decided to stay
Drank some more
And more
Laughed till closing
He took me home
I thought
Instead his place
tired and not myself
I wonder why?
Stretching in the morning
I felt a hand
Not mine!
Opening my eyes
My stomach sunk
Gathered my clothes
Sneaking out the back door
Been along time since
I awoke in someone else's
BED!

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    Sneaking out the back door
    Been along time since
    I awoke in someone else's
    BED!

    Oh my what a thing to wake up too

    Riftkin


  • Danna Hobart
    September 24, 2007
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    Oh, boy, been there, done that. Thanks for entering.