The moon was full
Cool breeze flowing
I looked wonderful
Felt great!
Met some friends
About ten at local bar
Drank a few
Then I saw him
He bought me a drink
I smiled thinking he is nice
We talked and drank
My friends went home
I decided to stay
Drank some more
And more
Laughed till closing
He took me home
I thought
Instead his place
tired and not myself
I wonder why?
Stretching in the morning
I felt a hand
Not mine!
Opening my eyes
My stomach sunk
Gathered my clothes
Sneaking out the back door
Been along time since
I awoke in someone else's
BED!
Author notes
fictional, written for contest
A contest entry
- The Bar Scene (Adult) by Danna Hobart.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sneaking out the back door
Been along time since
I awoke in someone else's
BED!
Oh my what a thing to wake up too
Riftkin -
Oh, boy, been there, done that. Thanks for entering.


