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9-11

Nine Eleven
A time of sadness
Many people now in heaven
People willed with badness

People grieving
People crying
People not believing
The planes flying

Crash right in the towers
what will happen next?
debris falling in showers
everyone perplexed

People jumping
People screaming
Things bumping
Blood streaming

Screaming, crying,
all things bad
people dying
people sad

Nine Eleven
A time of sadness
Many people now in heaven
People willed with badness

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  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    June 27, 2008
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    this is totally awesome i love it. i havent read another one like it. nice job!


  • SongOfSilence
    June 19, 2008

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    "Many people now in heaven"

    great write

    It was truly a time of great pain. You wrote this beautifully-- good job =) Love the way it flows.. great rhyme scheme =D

    keep it up ^.^


    -Seth


  • Little Blue Bird
    September 15, 2007
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    You summed it all up. Bittersweet memories.
    (3 Applause. I used all my points for the contest.)


  • Silvos. silver member
    September 11, 2007

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    A time of sadness indeed. A date that will forever go down in history, but regreting that it did every day. I love how your poem captures the exact feelings and actions that happened on this horrific date. Keep writing!

    Love it,
    Silvos.