Your my everything
My internal light
Forever shining your love
Without you I'd be nothing
For you I would do anything
Your love is mine for life
I love you
Author notes
prompt: "Looming mountains, unending skies, eternal heavens, impassable oceans, i'll cross them all to reach you, dear."
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10p. 30w. 24hrs by Asfand.
325 points, ended September 12, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Your my everything
My internal light
Forever shining your love"
Beautiful lines, amazing. I really liked this, it was short, which I like
, but it still held a lot of meaning and got the point of love and affection across. Great work, you should be proud.
Kelcey
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I think you meant 'you're' in the first line.
But this is a very beautiful, heartfelt piece of poetry. However clichéd it seems there is always power in the words 'I love you'.
DancingRed.
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AW! This is so sweet! I love it. Especially the end. This is such a powerful poem, to be so short lol. And thats a very good thing. This is deffinately one of my favorites by you.
Megan -
wonderful entry. thanks!
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