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A Love/Hate storm in me

My sight is dim
as he fights with me
and im fighting back with all my life
I pray to god how much he could see
how much I truly love him.

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  • goalsv
    October 8, 2008
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    Beautifully done. A truly praise piece!


  • tender-butterfly
    September 25, 2007
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    Thank you for the entry...

    Nicely and all the best to you...