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Winter Your Majesty

Waking up my eyes are blind
To the outside through the window
Step outside I find myself
In a flood of solid liquid



Cold, cold Winter
Why do they run away
Why would they wait to see you leave?

You’re the Queen of all
Yet to be crowned while we’re
Hidden in our wombs of dry warmth
And darkness, artificial sun



Catch a shape upon my shoulder
Icy cold and to the touch, the touch it burns
The ice away
It melts into my pulsing body 

Covers evil covers bad
In a pure and virgin blanket
I feel guilt to leave a mark
Upon your skin so easy shattered



Cold, cold Winter
Why do they run away
Why would they wait to see you leave?

You’re the Queen of all
Yet to be crowned when we’re
Hidden in our wombs of dry warmth
And darkness, artificial sun



Winter means the Death of all
So revealed the new beginning
Wipes away the paths of pasts
Leaves a white and shimmering canvas

To paint upon.
Imagination, birth awaiting
In the swollen stomach.

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  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 4

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    WOW! this was an amazing write! i loved reading it. awesome imagery and fabulous emotions. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • Kathraina silver member
    April 15
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    Wow, fantastic write!
    Marvelous imagery and emotion invoked here.
    Great job!!!


    ♥ Kate


  • Sia
    April 14, 2008

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    Thank you for entering ^_^

    This was a wonderful write. I love nature poems so this was a joy to read. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest @>}-


  • Silvos. silver member
    September 11, 2007

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    "Waking up my eyes are blind
    To the outside through the window
    Step outside I find myself
    In a flood of solid liquid"

    What a powerful 1st stanza! I love the description all through out this poem, and especially the 1st stanza. Great write, bravo.

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