Just beneath curve of ball,
arch of lense, pinpoint pupil
is instamatic image
of how cruel god can be
when tempering us for something worse
like towers’ fall; fallen-down faith
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10p. 30w. 24hrs by Asfand.
325 points, ended September 12, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow ~ very nice! great job!
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ty asfund. And thank you for the silver.
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short but effective.
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one of those few-words-do-it poems...usually I am goddess of gab on topics.
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Excellent
Wonderfully descriptive poem for the prompt. You captured it so well. Best of luck in the contest.
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ty penman. I appreciate you stopping by to comment.
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