If I asked
for death
would you give it to me?
Hand me the razor
the thing I beg for
the one true friend
I have!
If I asked
for life
would you still love me?
Hold me close
cuddle me in
whisper those words in my ear?
If I asked
for joy
could you give it to me?
Hold me close
love me
like you use to
give me your world back?
If I asked
for you
could we save us?
Would you save us?
Do you believe we are still
ment to be?
Baby I love you
If I asked
would you tell me the same?
Author notes
Just random thoughts I read another poem and this came to mind, dont ask I know I am twisted!
A contest entry
- I have writer's block. I need some inspiration. by Kati Kat.
500 points, ended September 21, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
random thoughts
Comments
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*feels all sad inside* <3
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Wow I can realte to this alot it is sad and hard to deal with things in life at times this is a nice write.Thanks for shairng.Best wishes and much love.
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Wow
That speaks out there. It's really sad, and I wish and hope you really didn't feel like that. But, we have our times. Today I felt like dying and wished my friends would just shoot me or something. o.o
And you thought you were crazy..lol
Great job on it. If I was judging this, I would give you a great score for creativity and depressing content.
^_^ -KX
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You have some typos, but it's good.....
In response to the first part about giving you death, no I wouldn't. All the rest, yes. I would...
Don't give up hope on whatever it is you are losing faith in!!!
~Asa of the Poets of Faith & Fate
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