Band of desires
holding life in circles,
skeleton lies
staring back
from one's reach,
grabbing conscience.
Bonded to truth,
secret thoughts
in fingertips
writing life
with the ink
of discovery.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10p. 30w. 24hrs by Asfand.
325 points, ended September 12, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah, another nice poem, good job!
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it is so, what we can not do, we often write. What we can do, we are afraid of so write it. What our petnetial is, can be a frightening thing. Brava!
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Thank you for the great comment.
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Hi big brother , great write, all the best in the comp, hugs
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Thank you sis for such a great comment.
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That pic is amazing! The poem flows so well with it as well. Bonded to the thruth of the discovery of ink...let the fingers do their work. ~Sie
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Thanks for the wonderful comment.
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Wow!
Wonderful weaving of words Sweetness
and what an roaming eye up there
Love this!!
Powerful piece penned and love the lines~
bonded to truth
also writing life with the ink of discovery
Thank You for sharing this!!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you love for the beautiful comment.
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