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Pain

Pain, I carve in my heart.
Relief, I feel nothing anymore.
Blood, it drips to my hands.
I cut in a little deeper and make another scar.
I think of how you betrayed me and in goes another cut.
The pain takes over and I close my eyes.
No more pain, I am finally gone.

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  • daddys girl08
    November 28, 2007

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    my pain also

    i feel like i want to hurt myself sometimes but then i don't. i end up writting and it helps me feel better so it's good you tell about feelings


  • Broken Machine
    September 19, 2007
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    Beautiful poem, I can relate. Keep up the good work, if you ever need to talk just message me.


  • colorxmyxworld
    September 17, 2007
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    WTF?

    Tia what are u thinking
    nice poem but wtf? is in ur head