Everything we do is lost
Life is over all too fast
Can’t you see the end?
Nothing will ever last
What will be the cost?
A contest entry
- Short and meaningful by tender-butterfly.
470 points, ended September 26, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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First of all thank you for the entry.
This write seems to be profound and holds lots of meaning.
Well done and all the best to you...
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dreary and depressing but I think you did exactly what the contest asked for. There definately seems to be meaning in those 5 lines. Good job and good luck. I hope the judge feels the same way I do.
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AH! i love this, it adds meaning to my life. it has hidden meanign as well. gratz
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