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Look Within

Heart broken,
soul empty,
look within,
there'll be plenty,
waiting to be woken

A contest entry

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  • tender-butterfly
    September 25, 2007

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    Firstly thank you for the entry.
    I think this is a deep write that has meaning attached to it.
    Nicely done and all the best to you...


  • Stardust100
    September 11, 2007
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    brilliand piece


  • wiccanway
    September 11, 2007

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    I like this! I'm guessing that this says even if someone breaks your heart, you should look within for the strength to go on? Good luck in the contest.