When the shades of ruby
Cast their glow on earth,
The breeze hums a song of 'Beauty'
Beseeching the leaves to take a break;
Grandeur adorning every tree
While sunshine spreads a carpet,
For the mortal man to see,
A stage from Heaven descends down
And hosts a scene for free..
As every leaf, with grace they fall
Whispers of 'Hope', heard in the air,
With promised treasures, at mankind's call
Elysian fields, lie where pathway's end,
Life time's seasons slowly crawl
To let the new days, sing their tune ~
Nature's orchestra in the open hall,
For the world to see and learn
Autumn's splendour comes to enthrall..
A contest entry
- September Songs by cherche -d -ame.
1750 points, ended September 24, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice images
congrats on the trophy . . nice write . . good descriptions and thought . . like "the breeze hums a song" and "sunshine speads a carpet" . .
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a beautiful poem so full of life, hope, promise and beauty, this was such a pleasure to read
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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WOW...your poem brought a magical feeling to my heart that I actually experiencing the 'Nature's orchestra in the open hall...' you've captured the majestic beauty of autumn with this lovely poem...
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Thankyou for the kind words
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thank you so much for entering this contest, thank you so much for these beautiful words.
And hosts a scene for free..
and what a scene you created with this. Free for me to enjoy and anyone else that runs across this write. I am a sucker for "Elysian Fields" used Not sure what exactly it is about that visual...but it always does the trick in my imagination. Thanks again and best wishes,
reenie
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Thank you for the very cheering comment.. Much appreciated
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My dear friend will the word excellent be enough of a comment ? Excellent as always
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Thankyou Legend.. u never cease to encourage.. I'm honored..
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