Do you want to join a frat
so you can be with these brats?
You leave your nest to test
if you belong to the best.
You will be King Nothing.
No time to sing or swing.
Helplessly taking orders,
crossing mental borders.
[Pre-Chorus]
They take away your sleep.
You're a number, you're a sheep!
They also crush your pride
to see if you are bonafide.
[Chorus]
You hear a constant yell,
that you do nothing well!
What happens there, no one can tell.
I shall welcome you to Hazing Hell!
Drinking gallons of beer,
with no bathroom near.
Kissing their smelly feet.
Running nude on the street.
Wearing diapers,
filled with vipers.
They have branded your ass
like the rest of the mass.
[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
Trapped in this inhumane game,
full of constant pain and shame.
Where all try not to cry,
are told to lie and deny.
Here's madness number one disease.
They got you on your bare knees.
Got the nerves to break down
in this big student's town?
[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best Rhyme by piccola.
300 points, ended January 15, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PRE-WRITES GALLORE ~!~!~! by Naridill.
800 points, ended January 31, 2008, 138 entries
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Comments
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A very different piece from everything I have been reading lately, you have written and chosen words nicely. The rhyme is a little awkward - as some words you choose don't rhyme with each other and also some bits seem forced but apart from that - this piece has beautiful potential.
Nicely painted.
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never a joiner myself but always truely independant, I've never wanted to be in a sorority...but I have heard of hell week and hazing. it's supposed to be against the law but guess nothing really is. Good discription. thank you for your entry.
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Genius,I tell you,pure genius!!!
This is EXACTLY and DEFINITELY told as it is-
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