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Wish a lot of wishes,
Dream a lot of dreams,
Whisper midnight kisses,
That you never let him see,

Two hearts aren't intertwined,
Two loves don't burn alone,
Two halves will never meet,
If they don't match they're on their own,

Like when North meets itself
Or when South follows suit,
Like when white reaches black,
When abstract meets absolute,

As far as East is from West,
As far as North is from South,
As far as day is from night,
That's how far love is without,

I'll wish a lot of wishes,
I'll dream a lot of dreams,
And if I whisper midnight kisses,
I'll never let him see...

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  • Celticjedi
    September 29, 2007

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    Sweet and clever. I love the little bit of mischief you put in there, so is the mind of a woman. Awesome use of title as well. Keep it up, thanks for entering!
    From,
    Cj

  • MyOwnAbuser
    September 14, 2007

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    Beautiful

    I like it allot, especially how the first is third person and the last is third person. Stanzas I think they're called. Yes that.


  • Naznomarn
    September 11, 2007
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    Oooooh sweeeeet

  • Naznomarn
    September 11, 2007
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    Oooooh sweeeeet

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