A call in the night, that was easily ignored,
What I felt after that was nothing compared,
A shock like no other, quickly turning to tears,
To find you had left me with nothing so dear,
You wanted to see me for one last time,
But that call in the night was completely dismissed,
You went away leaving me here,
Missing your smile, your love, your laugh,
Feeling nothing but guilt,
Knowing all you wanted was to see me,
But I ignored that call,
And now your gone!
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This is about my grandma!
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Lots of mixed emotions and confusion. I feel some more emotional responses near the end would help the sudden finish.
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So sad.Regret is a hard medicine to swallow.Have no fear, she will knwo how sorry you are.Take care, Ros
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this one is very nice and had a lot of feeling to it. good write
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Definitely a sad and heartfelt piece. You can just visualise the tears streaming down a saddened face. But you wrote it perfectly, so well done.
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This is really sad.But it is well written.A call in the night to be known that someone is gone is a call that alot have recieved.Thank you for sharing .Best Wishes.
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