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Not On The Front Page.

When somebody commits
a terrible crime,
why do the media,
repeat it
time after time?
I'm not super clever,
but I'm
sure that it
encourages more
fools to break the rules.
Front page news
can confuse
those who
long to be knew.
When a kid
stabs another,
don't put it on
the front cover,
or interview his mother,
or his older brother.
Write a short piece,
on page 22 at least,
maybe then,
fewer others
will copy the beast.
It make me rage,
when I see
the front page,
'Knife Man Kills 9 Kids
Only 9 Years Of Age'
Don't put these freaks
on the stage.

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  • Sean Logue
    November 22, 2007

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    Excellent.

    I have unfortunately no clappy dudes left, however,
    I found your piece to be excellently presented.

    Well done, someone with something to say.

  • Detached
    September 12, 2007

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    I totally agree with you, just once I'd love to pick up the paper and not read about the atrocities of the world in the first 3 pages, or watch tv without hearing about the same things. Well done.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    Bravo!

    And very well said, you picked a fantastic way to get the message across. Shame the editors of these papers don't realise what they're doing!


  • Stardust100
    September 11, 2007

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    Very well said, to some it will only encourage excite and egnite ones thoughts. I thought this after watching CSI (addicted to that) fueling the flames only brings greater pain.


    Well written hit a nerve there


    • xxMyBellxx
      September 11, 2007
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      Me too, I used to watch them all CSI Miami/ New York, but after watching so many, they started to be too predictable. So I'm having a break from them at the mo.

  • mmook
    September 11, 2007
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    thank you.. thank you maybe if was front page something can be done....


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    its a circus isnt it bell,,thats why i hate the news these days,,harping on endlessly about all the crap,,small wonder we are all becoming mad,,,InnocentWinkSurprised,well done xxpp


    • xxMyBellxx
      September 11, 2007
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      Wow how do you do all those crazy little faces ? I can only do a wink and a smile. lol See !

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