Name on the roadside is what im gonna be
I left school early i was using one of my free's
I moved so quickly i heard the wind against my ear
It happens suddenly a paths name is what i fear
Name on the roadside is soon to be me
Names on the roadside i will not fade from memory
my loves my laughter will echo free
Name on the roadside a sign of tragedy
The sounds are eerie as darkness settles iiiin
I hear them shouting
Is it for me or is it for him
He didnt see me i dont see anything
Name on the roadside and the sadness it will bring
Name on the roadside is soon to be me
Names on the roadside i willnot fade from memory
my loves my laughter will echo free
Name on the roadside a sign of clarity
the roses have settled
the roses have settled
the roses have settled
THE ROSES HAVE SETTLED
my name on the pavment sourly missed...
Author notes
says it all really http://sophaloafa.deviantart.com/art/Sunsets-and-Car-Crashes-60968255
b.] eternal silence
itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout"
A contest entry
- My first contest :) Loads of Options, Allowing Pre-writes. Come in and see:D by chilali.
700 points, ended November 5, 2008, 52 entries
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A very interesting write. Well written. I like the repetition. Thank you so much for entering and good luck. Please mention "the itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout" in your AN. If you read the entire contest page, you'll know why
Thank you once again
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An excellent tribute to your friend with a touch of sadness--
Good flow with an abundance of imagery.
Well written & Versed!!
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Abe
This poem I relate to perhaps a tragic death that could have been avoided with some guidance. You have painted me a picture of a young life no more
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This is a moving and wonderful tribute to your friend Abe.....you have done a magnificent job on this....
Peace
Rob.
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thanx mate
3 yrs ago now comin up
was a a fab guy
roses r still put there even now
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thanks a lot sorry about the two guys
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This is a really great poem, welcome to Allpoetry.
It's kind of strange because about 4 weeks ago, two guys from my school died and 2 were in hospital after a car crash in one of their free's.
I love each and every line of this, it's brilliant, haunting...just great.
Keep up the good work and take care x
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Wow
I can really see the image to unfold and the roses by the roadside that are left to pay respect
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