While seeking words to nourish my mind
I took refuge in your heart with peace
hoping that it will last forever....
Estuary is where I met you
It was rainy that day
And all I needed was a warm
word from someone like you
It is you I desire from the beginning
onwards..for you are the reason
I found my world...
I found myself in your words
My stone like heart melted...
I began to fly with happiness
All I want is to see you in real
But to cross the mile is so difficult
It can't be impossible...
Author notes
Estuary is a place where fresh water meets with salt water.
Please tell me what you think
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Tendery wistful ...
In lovely words that bring feelings of being cleansed from troubles and problems. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards, Sultan
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Thanks Sultan
I mean I really appreciate your comments.Hope to read more of your poems in near future take care.
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hey..nice flow of emotions...we always have a quest for a person who will make us complete..that person changes u positively..n gives u a new life..ur poem..shows the completeness..that i am talkin abt..
in life..sooner or later..u will surely find someone whom u always thought abt..its just a matter of time..after all..it can't be impossible..
tc..
PARTH.
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I hope you get a chance to meet your spouse in person if that is what you desire. I liked your poem, but found the third stanza to be a little choppy. Mazie
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