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Post-Modern Culture - Pyramids - Nile Trial in Denial

 

 

Post-modern culture lessons few has learned
Years stretched to centuries times forty-eight
Raising structures daring Time's 'dew' date.
Alas tide heralds dust to dust returned,
Mocks mankind's self-pollution coda earned.
Ice cap melt-down Giza, called the Great,
Dares threaten now, its powers bow to Fate,
As boom to bust bricks blow away, wind churned,
Leaves man at sea, too many bridges burned.
Polar pressures crack tectonic plate.
Open options exercised too late
Will mourn lost time when one dawn meets flood stern
Extending over reads, reeds, fern stems drowned,
Returning fallen pride to sea-slush mound.

Post-modern culture, pushy, churns ahead,
Yet spurred by institutions that remain
Resistant to internal change, which train
Ambassadors who vested-interest dread.
Mutant paradox is progress, fed
In bursts which cause, effect, link in a chain,
Driving change at speeds which sorely strain
The habits of the West, life as now led.
Each step Man takes towards the fountainhead
Leaves stranded an environment whose reign
Experience through time seemed prime. Its rein
Seems checked if not checkmated as Fate’s thread
COvers global village through soft sell -
PErmeating all with netted spell...

Post-modern culture thinks itself ahead,
Yet drawn by paradigmns out-dated, vain,
Reminding one of ostrich grounded bane
Administrators innovations dread.
Musings paradoxical are fed
In bursts haphazard cursed by growing pain,
Disturbing eco-systems, sorely strain
Climatic context,  for, consumer wed,
Our needs today - tomorrow’s fountainhead -
Leave land exhausted, growth against the grain,
Lead to fields exploited, yields which wane
As nutrients - monopolistic bre[a]d -
Prevent diversity to sound ground’s knell,
SEcond best accept, [l]and poison well.

Post-modern culture boasts empowered creed,
Yet sows its own destruction's seeds as greed
Rears hydra head to grasp Earth's gasp whose need
Aside is thrust as 'progress' must proceed.
Might at zenith, states say guaranteed
Is power's lasting hour naught may impede,
Doubts rejected, cash injected feed
Allows self-satisfaction space to kneed
Light illusions heady, soon sped, bead
THat Time on causal chain we thought had keyed
OUr future bounty. Countless stars succeed
GHosts which once on stage strutted, lost indeed.
Though pyramid once stood five hundred feet
Sea shall submerge those s[p]eeding self-defeat ...

Post-modern culture's ubiquity
Yearns to control - disinformation spreads,
Reads black as white, white black, inverting heads
And tails at need, breeds discord sea to sea.
Maybe there's none so blind as will not see
Ideas creative stifled, watersheds
Denied top d[r]own as mankind wets its beds
Contriving to ignore clima[c]tic key
Overshadowing our futures free,
Displacing as fee ride sub-prime homesteads.
Energy alternative now weds
Controversy's flight from conformity
On wood, trees, would ignored logged dialogue
DAtes carbon die cast backtrack die_a_log.

 

 

Author notes

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Pyramid_of_Giza


Acrostic sonnets :

Pyramidal Power
Pyramid Telescope
Pyramid Collapse
Pyramidal Thoughts
Pyramid Code Coda

n.b. in respect of ...
Ice cap melt-down Giza, called the Great,
Dares threaten now, its powers bow to Fate,
As boom to bust bricks blow away, wind churned,
Leaves man at sea, too many bridges burned.
Polar pressures crack tectonic plate...


Background

http://flickr.com/photos/michaeljohn/450444185/

Pyramid pics

http://flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2662914754/


Arctic Ice at historic lows September 2007

http://www.nsidc.org/news/press/2007_seaiceminimum/20070810_index.html

Greenland Earthquakes as ice comes unstuck - Sept 2007
Ilulissat glacier melting
http://www.guardian.co.uk/environment/2007/sep/08/climatechange

National Snow and Ice Center 25 March 2008
Wilkins Shelf
http://www.nsidc.org/news/press/20080325_Wilkins.html

Wilkins Shelf hanging by a thread 10 July 2008

http://www.esa.int/esaCP/SEM2U5THKHF_index_0.html  


Pic interstanza photo
http://flickr.com/photos/stealthchicken/2259464710/

Pit and Pendulum
http://flickr.com/photos/marc_lougee/2416443303/

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Comments

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  • judyjudyjudy
    April 5
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    This is a highly complex, well thoughtout piece with some striking images. It most certainly does deal with questions relating to humankind.

    You obviously worked very hard but the poem would have benefited from one last proofreading. I saw several mistakes.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

  • elmundopasa1
    April 1
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    how did this not win gold. great great great job.
  • Superb

    Fantastic, indeed just as it is. Hope all is well with you.
  • Superb

    Wow, a plethora of thoughts cascaded through my head as I read this write. Very well done indeed.

  • Outstanding

    I am always impressed by the number of ideas and images you include in your poetry. You create a verbal picture that challenges the intellect and sees the world in a fresh perspective. I love the honesty of your work and the integrity. A fantastic poem full of concepts and intense imagery.


  • ModernXTimes silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    That was definitely one of the most profound pieces of anything that I have ever read. Sure it took a real long time for me to even begin to understand what you were trying to convey, but in the end, through all of the lavish, and exquisite imagery and language, I was able to gain some of the truth of our "post-modern Culture." I just love that title by the way. The phrase post-modern is an amazing one. I think it's one of the stand out points of the piece. Anyways, good luck in the contest

    Sincerely,
    ModernXTimes

  • Ellis gold member
    December 22, 2007
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    Excellent Writing

    I'm a believer in the "inconvenient truth."
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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    "Each step Man takes towards the fountainhead
    Leaves stranded an environment whose reign
    Experience through time seemed prime. Its rein
    Seems checked if not checkmated as Fate’s thread
    COvers global village through soft sell -
    PErmeating all with netted spell..."

    A wondrous penning permeated with lush language, stark truths, still shining upon the horizon with hope, my Friend. Beautifully executed in remarkable form, dear Scribe. Impressive, as always. "Wow, what a vocabulary", indeed. More like, "wow, what incredible insight & bountiful brilliance", methinks. Wanda

  • Climbing2nothing
    November 10, 2007

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    Seems checked if not checkmated as Fate’s thread

    a sphereical veiw indeed, time as the failures of school children and over due projects, this peice astounding in complexity and vision of the dimensional trinity, quite complete in thoughts and leaves the reader in a state of watching the sky in hope of abduction, well done..

    with chai and cookies
    Jas


  • nansie
    October 18, 2007

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    Wow what a Vocabulary

    But I just needed something simple and words that
    could just send it home to peoples hearts about the state of the planet, Thank you for entering

  • ellipsist
    October 8, 2007

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    the ending makes this piece for me

    however, in your first line: "Post-modern culture lessons few has learned" I think "has" should be "have" but perhaps I am reading this incorrectly?


  • eternal-devotion
    September 28, 2007

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    Very creative.

    I think that you can elicit a lot of emotions with your words. This is very deep and thoughtprovoking. you sure have a way with words and tell an interesting therorey on the earth. Thanks for guiding me to this as you bring up things in a way I hadn't thought of. Very good write.
  • pruedence
    September 11, 2007

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    Very imformative poem! Thought provoking, and I like that...we all need to open our eyes wider...great work here, thanks for sharing

  • waydownuponjoy
    September 11, 2007

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    Should be read

    more than once... as your first impression may only be a vague idea in which some confidence is placed! This poem, in which the ‘pyramid acrostics’ forms a large base for thoughts, needs to be contemplated by more than just a few. The vertex culminating in a plea that should alert each of us to become a part of the solution! joy

    . Rewarded 6

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