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I Can't Breathe

Weapons of mass destruction.
Hurricane Katrina victims.

Hybrid vehicles.
S.U.V.s.

Terrorists.
Open borders.

Hydrogen and
stupidity.

Author notes

The most common elements in the universe are hydrogen and stupidity

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  • BluesMan gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    Alas such a bleak future one would find it hard to breathe Thank you for entering my contest


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    June 6, 2008

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    Boy, this is really thought-provoking!! Thanks for the post!!


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    June 6, 2008

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    So true...

    ...you have expressed a lot of thought in a few lines. Well done. I like the succinct examples and the truth of the last two lines.


  • tawk gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Wow what a very unique poem but so fits the prompt given. I so enjoyed reading good luck in the contest Theresa


  • penman gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    A very appropriate poem for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Heavens Child
    September 12, 2007

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    Amen to that! I didn't read the author's note before I read the open, so the ending actually came unexpected. But damn was it good. I fell in love with that quote when I first read. Thanks for entering.

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