One thousand ways to feel
I think I've felt them all.
One thousand ways to love
Yet two thousand ways to fall.
Love is a game of taking steps,
yet its one ahead and two steps back.
I'm tripping with everyone
and the world's going black.
Looking for answers in the dark
Grasping for what's not there
I'm lost in the dark abyss
and no one seems to care.
I didn't see it coming,
I seemed to float to the top.
I was so blind,
that I didn't see the drop.
So I was free falling
Without a safety net
I tore down my walls
I guess that's what I get.
A contest entry
- Options...once again... by Celticjedi.
450 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
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wow, this is a beautiful poem! And the title was awesome, eye catching. Amazing write!
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Wow, that was cool! The very first stanza was my favorite, it's so full of truth and packed a good punch to the reader. Awesome job! I love this title. Maybe I should write something.
Thanks for entering, keep it up!
From,
Cj
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amazing
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I loved the second set of lines, its just like me. This is very well written.
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Yeah, this is a good poem, great flow, the first stanza was my favourite.
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great opening-
One thousand ways to feel
I think I've felt them all.
One thousand ways to love
Yet two thousand ways to fall.
Draws you straight in-
nice flow, sad write though-many of us have felt like this I think...you describe emotions well.
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aw, i've totally felt like this before. don't give up yet!! really nice rhyme scheme and flow in this, and i like the consistency. great write overall
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Very well done for the chosen prompt, you did a fine job with this one. Best of luck in the contest to you...Scott
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awesome
One thousand ways to feel
I think I've felt them all.
One thousand ways to love
Yet two thousand ways to fall.
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