This isn't just the story of a boy and a girl,
there love bonded to there hearts forever.
This is the story about how someone can survive,
even if the pain is as bad a pulling out your heart.
What can you do when he says that 'it is different',
or 'we should see other people' or something like that?
Do you just stand there and take it however you can,
or do get destroyed inside and tore apart till your beyond repair?
She did all she could and held herself together,
atleast until no one could see her shining tears fall from her cheeks.
She looked at that black ground till it seemed to flood,
and she drowned into the the bleak darkness of depression.
What is a little girl to do when her world has seemed to crumbled,
and her dreams seem to be a journey away from achivement?
What is a lttile boy to do when he follows her around seeing hurt,
nothing more in her eyes than the worst you can offer?
A sad little girl in the corner crying till she can't breathe,
and a little boy saddened by the tears of his favorite girl?
So young and restless and tired of the hurt they offer and recieve,
several children and adult alike always having problems like this.
This little girl stood tall after she cried her river,
never closing her eyes till she couldn't control herself.
She would look happy and smile for the pictures and friends,
but alone she would let out a sob and let her emotions run free.
But one day she couldn't hold back her river of hurt any longer,
and she ran away and as far as she could till she couldn't see.
But she still saw the one person she didn't want to see her,
the little boy with the broken eyes and the sad little face with regrets.
What else was the boy to do but give her confert and hope she is fine,
or was there anything else he could choose to do in this situation?
So he took the other choice and walked away from the moment,
regreting ever step but knowing it will help her recover.
So she finally saw he wasn't worth it cause he walked away,
so she spent her few years left alone moving on.
Till the day she could survive and look him in the eyes,
she smile and him and whispered in his ear 'thank you'
Author notes
I thought this one was a sad poem to write for me because I could see this happening to me...
A contest entry
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Awh.
So sad sweety!
thank you for entering.
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JUDGED
Sometimes the only thing a person can do when they can't have the one they love is to just see the person for who he really is.... in this case the boy was a jerk and a coward... very nicley written... I love the emotion in the piece with how the girl dealt with the pain... what a delight to read... Thank you so much for entering... and good luck -
I love to read poetry, but sometimes I wish the long ones could end…No! This was stunning…I love the flow of it, it made it so easy to read. Its beautiful in so many ways and I like the fact that you made it clear that hope does prevale! Thank you for this, great entry! Good luck!
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OMG i loved it becuz seriously i felt like this until i found my babe well almost but still omg omg omg i love it so much girly girl i just cannot believe you wrote this becuz this one is so adorable omg i can't stop smiling dude its like you read my freaking mind omg i effin luv you lol very very very good keep writing like this omg i can't stop saying omg WOOO amanda amazing poem! luv ya ~kal
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amazing
wow..what was happening? i like how u put ur login-name into this poem
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oh wow sis this was just really deep and emotional and i am sure many people can relate to the feelings that you weaved into this
hope your ok sis and know i am always her
love ya
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This seemed not to flow well to me for some reason.
But it was sad and it played out nicely in my head.
Maybe you could try rewording some of it.
~Sweetamber~
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