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turning a comment into a poem

I want to be there for you, too.
Sometimes, I cry in the middle of work or school

This week, I was about to cry since I was overwhelmed
because of family, church, friends, and life in general.
But I held it in and ran upstairs to cry.

It wasn't until you shared this,
was I able to share with you
because I'm the same way

I have a hard time opening up to real life friends.
I feel like when I open up,
others can use that against me and hurt me.

But when I share I feel like I don't have to deal with my pain, victories.. alone..
There's a double bind in not wanting to risk it all and wanting to be heard.

Please tell me what you think

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  • damagicalpony
    September 13, 2007

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    I know how you feel. I like it!
    And as far as "Broken Heart I Want" goes, yes I do do spoken word. We're putting together this assembly with our school with Kevin Coval. Believe me, I want to perform that piece.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    wow this was awsome it was different and unqiue making it captivating and powerfully done
    well done hun