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Remembering the Sweetshop Lady in the 1930s

As if performing some sleight of hand,
the square,
she had neatly torn
from last week's newspaper,
would become a miniature dunce's cap.

She would wait, patiently,
by her gleaming brass scales,
whilst I,  spellbound,
reviewed the contents   
of the four, tuppence-a-quarter, jars,

and counted,
and counted, yet again,
my two large copper Saturday pennies,
with which I would pay
for what I decided to order.

A quarter of jelly babies? -
(to hoard the black ones till last) -
or two pennorth of dolly mixture;
or pineapple toffee, or pear drops?
By what magic taste-bud formula should a boy decide?

She would smile knowingly,
reaching for the first of the jars,
as the spell finally broken
I  would entually say:
"Four separate haporths, please".

Author notes

An old man 'down-under' remembers his boyhood days 'up-over'.
A pennorth= a penny worth
A haporth = a halfpenny worth
Tuppence = two pennies

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  • Twins 4 me
    September 27, 2007
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    This is a very interesting and intriguing piece! Thanks for entering!