It's a dark and twisted day
It's a day of misery
A day of navy blue
My life just wanting to flee
A day of disappontment
A day of darkness, no light
a day of scarey hours
that will bring me much fright.
A twisted day
It would make your stomach cringe
It caused my soul to rip
And my heart to deeply singe.
The memories filled by this day
From exactly a year ago
Nothing can make it better
This day is twisted low.
This day twisted around my neck
Allowing me not to take a breath
Only getting tighter and tighter
And closer to my dreary death.
A dark and twisted day
You wonder what from
If I only had the strength tell you
But my twisted heart is too numb.
Author notes
Written September 23rd, 2003
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hey this is very good, I enjoyed reading it and good luck to you! just one typo noticed, line 18 i think breath might need to be a breath. but im not possitive.
Jen -
oh don't i know that feeling all too well, great expressive write, i think that the only grammar thing i saw was "tighter" was spelled tigter, but aside from that this was massivly powerful and i can relate on alot of levels, i think your brilliant...please keep writing
~nicolealyce~
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