Oh beautiful,
Where did you go?
I can't be alone
With no one to hold.
And I can't stand to say...
I'm nothing without you
And I can't do anything all day!
I don't know what to do
Since you bid me ado!
And I haven't been
Myself for oh so long
And there isn't anything
That no one can do!
I can't stand my life without you!
My tulips
Are so lonely
Without you to hold me.
And I don't know
For how long I can stand this.
So I beg of you
Please come back to me!
I'm dieing without you
And i don't have much time
To live by my crime.
So I apologize
With all of my heart!
I know its hard for you
To see me through
But try to believe
That I am not to deceive
Though i think i truly am
In love with you!
Oh, please come home to me, honey
'Cause I've got the money.
It's a good deal
And I'll be the reel
To get you back
And then we'll have...
Uh never-mind.
'What?'
Its very kinky.
'Oh...'
All I'm trying to say
Is that I have no other way
To live without you!
Author notes
Saveourcity
A contest entry
- True Love by Samantha Marie.
450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmmm this was a tad long, but like I said there were no rules on that
So this is a song you wrote? It's pretty good for a song, I'm sure it would sound better with the music to it
The rhyming is alittle cheesy, but I can see where it would make sense (and be less cheesy) as lyrics
And the Last two stanzas sound alittle awkward...
But overall good write
Good Luck~! -
wow i love it i could understand how u feel
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This is your song? cool. It is very unique, I can feel the pain your trying to convay in this poem/song. Good job!~
*peace*
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