Motionless
I stand there in the stillness
Like a lost raindrop that is falling faster to touch the hard ground.
To feel alive.
Life's road is not easy.
Once you stand on your feet
Once you're down, you crawl.
You can't predict it.
It's a destiny.
And my destiny full of surprises
is hiden in the box deep in my heart.
It's safe there and nobody can steal it.
Each day it grows, it gets bigger.
It exists although I can't see it.
And it can bring anything!
But it's mine and I'll accept it.
So I'll just wait to see for the day when happines may prevail,
For the sun after the rain,
For the brightness after the twilight night.
Maybe that day can bring me something sacred,
A happines that has always ligtened my way.
A reason to feel a flame of joy even in the most dreadful chaos.
It may bring you.
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My thoughts, my life.
Please tell me what you think
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absolutely beautiful! i love it..it's awesome
keep up the writing!
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Though this didn't have structure and the flow was choppy, the message was strong and your words we true. This was indeed a very powerful piece. Well done.
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This poem is wonderful. It's deep and really helps people feel what you were trying to say. I liked the part,
"A reason to feel a flame of joy even in the most dreadful chaos."
Beautiful =]
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Marvelous
And my destiny full of surprises
is hiden in the box deep in my heart.
It's safe there and nobody can steal it.
Each day it grows, it gets bigger.
It exists although I can't see it.
And it can bring anything!
But it's mine and I'll accept it.
So I'll just wait to see for the day when happines may prevail,
For the sun after the rain,
For the brightness after the twilight night.
Maybe that day can bring me something sacred,
A happines that has always ligtened my way.
A reason to feel a flame of joy even in the most dreadful chaos.
It may bring you.
U did a gorgeous job sis wit this poem and its beautiful and wonderful way to go sis.loved the whole poem and especailly theses lines here..wonderful job wonderful job and very powerful, emotional poem..alsome write and enjoyed it keep da ink flowin
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Another great write by you dude. I always enjoy reading your poetry, it is so creative and original. Great write.
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