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Pleasurable Disease -xx ♥

Love me, beat me, live
Hate me, kiss me, die.
I am leathal, I am poision,
Evil with a sugar kiss,

Irresitable, so tastey,
I watch as you take it all in.
I am danger and salvation,
You're one true obssesion.

Eyes peirce through your soul,
I see inside to truths untold.
I see myself, the tramp the whore,
One good fuck deserves some more.

Nasty minded dirty soul,
Terror for excitment in the eyes of a nympho.
Drugs rushing through these veins of glass,
Pain for pleasure, no more mask.

Hands on my ruined temple,
Mending every piece.
I may look alright,
But I am engulfed within this pleasurable disease.

So eat me, beat me, fuck me, save me,
Psyco, groupie give me cocaine,
I need to feel it deep inside,
Need to know I'm not a lie.

Author notes

I was going through a lot and was very conflicted at this time... it's about my confusion of what I wanted... what I craved for... my addiction... my suppressed feelings and hopes.... I know it's hard to see all that in such a fucked up poem but it's all there

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  • scarletstains
    September 12, 2007
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    I really enjoyed this.
    Great write!<3

  • Lady Jean
    September 12, 2007
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    LOVE IT!

    holy shit that is SO FUCKING AWSOME!! I LOVE IT!


  • FlipperSwitch
    September 10, 2007

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    It makes sense to me! I love this piece!! The feeling is chilling and amazing, and somehow relatable! Great great write! Math class...maybe I should go...


  • sublimewriter
    September 10, 2007

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    this makes sense to me. there's a certain beat to the line "so eat me, beat me, fuck me, save me." those words seem to be similar, with different nuances.


  • Caliel.Celestine
    September 10, 2007
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    Nice, it makes sense, don't worry ^^

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