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Tides

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Thoughts ripple
like gentle waves
caressing
till the tide rips
and all order is swallowed
by the pull of your heart.







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  • mommymo silver member
    November 28, 2007
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    ok simply put

    simple to understand easy read nice work


  • Mari Goes
    September 23, 2007

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    The first verses have a very tender feel, now the last two left me wondering. There is some ambiguity there, or at least it is how I see.
    I like short poems, and I liked this one


  • storiesuntold
    September 11, 2007
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    Very good

    Short but oh so sweet the vibrations of the soul in memory of love


  • smiley
    September 10, 2007
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    wow

    I like it a lot.. It makes one think.

    Yvonne