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Loneliness

Have you met me?
WATCH OUT !
I will take your BODY and SOUL.
BEWARE !
I will destroy you and all that you are.
I can make you bleed.
I can make you destroy yourself .
And all that is sacred.

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  • char-char
    October 13, 2008
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    WoW really good
    love how you worded it


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    September 10, 2007

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    TRUTH........................

    Truth in such few lines, mommy...Loneliness can drive one to the point of insanity and go over the edge, ending their life... ~jeremi

  • talmidemets
    September 10, 2007
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    very good


  • FaeryMouse
    September 10, 2007
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    For your first poem it's really good