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Angelynn

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NOW I LAY ME DOWN TO SLEEP
MY LITTLE ANGELS FACE I SEE
I WANT TO WAKE IN A DIFFERENT WORLD
I NEED TO HOLD MY BABY GIRL
HER EYES I NEVER SEEN LOOK UP AT ME
HER SWEET VOICE WILL NEVER SAY "I LOVE YOU MOMMY"
NO EYES THAT OPENED
NO VOICE TO CRY
I NEED TO KNOW FROM YOU LORD "WHY"
HOW AM I TO GO ON WITH MY LIFE
TO BE A GOOD MOM AND WIFE
I NEED SOME PEACE THAT ONLY YOU CAN GIVE
I NEED IT LORD SO THAT I CAN LIVE

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  • Danna Hobart
    February 21

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    The pain in this is very raw. I wish I had words to ease it, but all I can do is let you know that there are others who understand exactly the way you feel.

    Thank you for entering.


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Very sweet and yes I asked God why myself many times. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I really want to thank you for entering it in my contest.


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your kind words. Sometime's instead of asking why we just have to accept or we can go on living.

      Thanks again
      darlintlc


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 15, 2008

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    Heartbreaking piece of writing. Well-deserved trophies here too. This was so very very deep. Such sadness running through this. Keep writing.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 15, 2008
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      Thanks Hon,
      It was a very hard time in my life.
      Angelynn was my only little girl.

      darlintlc
      xxxooo

  • JanessaKatzer
    May 12, 2008
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    beautiful!! i really like this one!!
    thanks for entering! good luck!!


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 12, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting on "Angelynn"
      I wrote this the night I came back from the hosptal after losing my only daughter. I didn't know how I was going to go on with life.

      Thanks again
      darlintlc

  • ccb
    April 22, 2008
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    very sad and very sorry.


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 17, 2008
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    Ooooo..im so sorry!good poem..sad!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    So sad indeed

    Within a heartfelt note I give whisper her name and she will hear within your soul you hold her still
    Until rejoined that day . Love floats within your space held with love now in Gods grace .Look out on each new day and see the beauty she sends your way . The song of a bird just for you and a butterfly brand new a soft gentle breeze lays a kiss on your face with love you are carresed every day .


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    September 12, 2007

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    i love this......i didnt want the lord in it..but it is good. i really like it..

    Thank you

    Diamond

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