Walked in the rain on a sunny day
That was not bright but dull gray
Ergo, I was a sunburned wet fella
Because my cane is not an umbrella
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A contest entry
- Make me laugh by lilblueeyesmine1978.
425 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Intelligent blabber (for those poets who like writing random things!!) by allfivehorizons.
550 points, ended October 5, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hehehe... so much fun to read! I enjoyed this a lot. "My cane is not an umberella" made me grin. hehe.. I like short poems. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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cute. very cute. short, sweet and to the popint. overall i really liked this thanks for entering and good luck. i will try to read more from you maybe after the contest is over.
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