Though my girl is gone
I decided to move on
She said I was a flirt
so she treated me like dirt
I might be a little too easy
which would make some a bit queasy
but thats just me
thats all I see
I think I'm fine
even with a dirty mind
So if you like to do the same
come play my flirting game
We'll laugh and have fun
and a little more before its done
Please tell me what you think
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Yeah, I loved this one. You have such a talent for spinning words together. Great job.
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I used to be like that so I can understand. Why people would think that of you. But when you find the one you will give it all up because you know that person doesn't deserve it even if they don't care. Its true and too the point. I am not much for structure but if I was you'd probably have one of my favorite poems right here. Rhyming is just not something I do. So it doens't really matter what I do its all just there.
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lmao
Yet again, I'm impressed by your humor and bright outlook.
I love reading your poems; they make me feel incredibly warm, tingly, and silly.
You seem to be one of those people who have this contageous good-will and positivity.
Another precious write.
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Haha! Very clever. Nice rhyme, smooth meter. Only thing you can do when left to eat anothers dust is...move on. Good for you, flirt
Enjoyed the read.
Bella
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Fun write.
"I think I'm fine
even with a dirty mind"
That part just made me smile ...
Nicely written and thanks for the comment on my poem
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Great write. I love it so much. Write some more. Hot in here.
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Wooo, hoooo, sounds great lol. You go on with ur bad self baby, lol. Seriously I like it, and u should move on.
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lol your a man whore i swear sweet angel! loved this poem. honest im sure! great write!
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I like it. Great rhyming sequence. You might be easy, but your a good poet. Great write.
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lol. Good poem
~Lorissa~
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