depending
sublime
lime is sub
sub is lime
the day i met a lily
she was depending
On me to play poke a pig
the pig got breezy
and shit hit the pan
the pan was hot
and she was not
it all fell into the melting pot
cultures mixed, candles melted
the given was taken and taken was pelted
so much for the sauce and so much for the smell
loving was hard and living was hell
i felt like a cat with the neck tied on a bell
the bell was no ordinary
it made a daring sound
the parish came running with every sigh from the hound
i remained no longer , reduced to shreds
if you li then you are bound to be su
right ed
A contest entry
- Make me laugh by lilblueeyesmine1978.
425 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
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Comments
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this smells funny lol.. interesting play with the spellings.. Write more often please?
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not exactly what i was looking for but thanks for sharing anyways. i will read more of yours if i get the chance maybe after the contest.
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