Loving you comes easy,
Loving you is like breathing
It comes with asking
With no ending in sight
This feeling burns inside me...
I wish it to not stop
Cause with out I die
Loving you makes me feel whole
Without I see the end getting...
closer and closer
Never let go of what you have
Hold it dear if means...
Everything to you
Thats what I plan on doing
Never letting you go.
A contest entry
- "What You Love" by FallenAngel09.
300 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Thank you for your entry into my contest, your talent is much appreciated. i do really like this poem, the ethereal quality to it that, though you didn't actually mention dreams, I felt it in every word written. It was an awesome poem and good luck in the contest.
Your Host,
Tiphanie
p.s sorry for waiting so long to actually comment on your poem, it has been hectic and I haven't actually had time to do anything but study. Hope you are well.
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