The joy of life then wasted
On ifs and buts and inbetweens
Lies are rarely tasted
And fools are who we deem
The many great temptations
And fears we all do dread
Are just an instigation
That messes with ones head
The chance at finding love
The rush that sex can bring
These moments of pure splendor
No nicer happening
Yet waste away your day
As all our time is critical
The chance to love and play
Or pop a pill to keep you still
So if your feeling down
And thinking things ain't right
Grab that special someone
Whisper softly. " Make love to me tonight "
By Bob Fox
Please tell me what you think
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wonderful...your pen has so much power....you are in fact unique...keep well my mate....
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a celebration of the simplest, but most difficult to find, of life's pleasures! thank you for sharing this . . .
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thank You
It is appreciated
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this was awesome bob i think you did a excellent job at penning this i was pleasured in reading this
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ty Dear
It was nice of you to read & comment on my poem
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Awesome poem you have penned I love the feeling behind this one.I really like the flow and rhyme.A splendid write indeed.Everything came together nicely And the ending was great.BRAVO!!!
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Wonderful Words
Well Bob, it sounds like good advice to me. I totally agree. You have penned a very thoughtful and true poem. Sometimes we can not be with the one in our heart so we settle for what they can give us. It makes it very hard to move on and be with someone when your true feelings are elsewhere. I hope things get better for you. You take care, Sandy
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thank you so much my kind friend
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yes, there is nothing more slendid than making passionate love with the one you love
great write, so very true...we can all get lost in things that don't even matter.
your friend,
Michelle
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thank you
Again Thank you sweet lady
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Great temptations..fears we dread..just a instigation..messing with the head.."Make love to me tonight" Then you must do that, find that special someone and whisper softly in her ear
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the rush that sex could bring,...yikes...
couldnt tell ya been so long i think.. oh wwel nevermind. this was a definately great piece on Critical times. Wonderful
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Hey i think it has been long for many in this group. Myself included
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