Street corners drift away into a cache of memories
And faces once so clear are now lost
Little actions, then retractions
Speak of who we really are
And the lights flickers on the Avenue
Searching out the mortal you, your chance to make a stand
Defiant and righteous
Nothing can shatter you
But one message, that call deep in the night
Awakes the truth in you
And for tomorrow you prepare
But does tomorrow dare prepare for you
By Bob Fox
Please tell me what you think
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NICE
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ooh, rather creepy.... live for today for we know not what tomorrow might bring.... a great write - lovely choice ofvocabulary to write with... ;D
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A very lovely creation
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Haunting and sad yet so very lovely, your words are very deep and hearfelt, you teach me new meanings with everything from your pen
BEAUTIFUL
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very sad but nice
Another lovely and well formed poem,stle like this fits really well....good luck -
Really SAd Bob...................
This is soooo sad Bob!!! It is a sad reality that kind of sometimes creeps upon us and slaps us right in the face. I am really sorry for yur loss. I had one recently myself, family too. You wrote this piece in a philosophical way being very deep but getting your point across nicely. Thanks for sharing and hope your heart begins to heal soon!!!~~Toni~~
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Toni
I guess I just am not taking theses things to well , this is 3 in the last 4 months. Thank you my friend
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Pain
Seems it is coming in bunches & this big body may be breaking down. But I thank you always for your kindness Sandy -
As I have been reading your poems I can feel the sadness in your words my friend. You write like me, with truth and what you are feeling. Keep writing, it is the best thing to do when we are hurting.Take care of yourself. Always know you have dear friends here who are always here for you. Bless you, Sandy
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Such deep sorrow in your words and a heavy heart
...Don't guess we are ever really prepared for life's tragedies...Hope you feel better soon love
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Yes
I try to perpare every day. Thanks Ann
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No it doesnt prepare for me, but i do prepare for it
great job here friend. Best wishes to you. Too early to make me think yet you awaken the truth in me, PREPARE yourself for noone else can prepare you.
Yes im confusing this morning.
Tory
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