You still drive me crazy and wild,
provocative thoughts within.
Your voice still stirs me, gets me riled,
as pleasures of night begin.
Whispers of longing mid our teasing
leave me wanting so much more,
Our bantering so full of pleasing,
reflects our loving rapport.
Draw me in, let me be one with you,
thrill me again, take me there.
Come love me like only you can do,
softly touch my skin so fair.
Feelings take hold, I lose all control,
sensations help fill the night.
Once more as a woman, I feel whole,
dalliances of delight.
In a list
A contest entry
- No Pretense by JustBe.
1107 points, ended October 13, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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If the truth be known, the driving force of nature cannot brush with you in this. Flamoyant, yet modest in the same stroke of attention.
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Thank you again for reading many of my poem and leaving such nice comments. I appreciate everyone of them.
You take care, Sandy 
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PLEASE do not remove your entry. I do plan to give you quality commentary, and I am sorry it has taken me this long. to even say this much. This is easily the hardest contest I have judged, if you did not win, then that means only just slightly more than nothing, as far as this judge is concerned.
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ouch!thats sweet
hey there it is a wonderful write friend. the choice of words is perfect and it flows easily.keep it up sis!
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Wonderful Comment
Hello Chris. I hope all is well with you. So nice to see a comment from you. I hope you write a new poem soon.
Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate it very much. You take care, Sandy
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Mmm *mind floats away* hehe such beautiful words, I really like the subtlety of this yet there is no mistaking what is meant. Fantastic imagery, lovely message - thank you for sharing once again
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning, Thank you for stopping by and leaving this nice comment. So nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy i
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Lovely write. The imagery of loving someone special is well thought.
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Very Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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With a poem like this
Everyone is right there doing the same thing. we will all be happy for a while...mac
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Great Comment
Good Morning Mac, Thank you for another nice comment. I do enjoy you stopping by. You take care, Sandy
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Fantastic
Hello, Sandy!, you've hit a real slam dunker here my friend! beautifully written with great flow, and such lovely soft imagery, well done indeed, a delight to read!
your pal,
Alex.
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Hello Hello!!!
Alex, it is always a pleasure to see your name in my comments. I hope all is well with the family. It is such a pleasure to have your friendship. You and a few others are very dear to me. You are always in my prayers. Always know I am here for you.
Gee I guess I am in my serious emotional reflecting on my life mood this morning.
You take care. Sandy 
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A real pleasure to read! This flowed so perfectly! Great write my friend and good luck!
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Hey There!!
Hi Rob, How is my friend today? Always nice to read your comment. Hope all is well north of the border. You have anice day and I hope you write soon. I will be checking You take care way up there!! Blessings. Sandy
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This is a wonderful piece. It gives out thoughts worth thinking and emotions that make you smile. I like love poems like this; that don't state the obvious but go beyond that to a level that truly becomes love.
Great work with this piece; I like it a lot!
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Lovely Comment
Hi, So glad my poem made you smile. That is a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much. You take care, Sandy
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verry nice dear.. as always (: best of luk in this contest
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Nice Comment
Hello, Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate you always stopping by and reading my poetry. You take care, Sandy
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A thoughtful write
A thoughtful write
This is striking as a real type of love of loving that only a few, i would guess could ever hope to know.
my favorite line is
"Draw me in, let me be one with you,"
i like the double meaning.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, and good luck with the competion.
regards
perdix
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Wonderful Poem
Thank you so much for this lovely comment. It was very nice and most appreciated. Thank you for stoping by. It is nice to meet you. Take care, Sandy
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well written piece get to reader emotion.. thanks
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Very Nice Comment
Hello mmook, Nice to hear from you. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a nice comment. You take care. Sandy
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Such a soft provocative piece you have penned here, filled with emotion, and flowing gently along.
Much tenderness.
I really liked this.
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Very Good Write.
This is a very well written piece. I loved your Rhyme scheme and the flow was excellent.
I was just Browsing and saw the Title and clicked on it. Glad I did Good Luck in the Contest. -
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Thank You
Good Morning, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for stopping by and reading. Always nice to meet a new poet on here. You take care and have a nice day. Sandy
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Hiya this is amazing I think you have a grate talent!
I love the first line
'You still drive my crazy and wild'
I think it was a grate read
I idn't want to stop reading that when you know it is a good poem!
Thanks once again for writing such a grate poem
All the best
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX
God Bless You And All You Care For!
p.s
I think you should enter this in to a contest
I know If I hade one going write now I would love you to be in it I am sour you would win a gold for this type of poem
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Awesome Comment
Wll this was one of the nicest comments I have received. I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem. Thank you for stopping by. I write from my heart so I appreciate when someone enjoys reading it. You take care, Sandy
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And she's done it again!
LOL By done it again I mean created a beautiful write. I love reading your work. You always make such pretty paintings with your words and brighten my day when I read them.
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Thank You
You comment made me smile. I am glad you enjoyed and liked it. I always appreciate your thoughts. You take care, Sandy
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