I have so many dangerous thoughts,
Running through my troubled mind,
All of these emotions of passion,
All focused on one special guy,
I may be lucky to have found him,
But living so risky is not what I had in mind,
Such torture I am made to endure,
His smouldering eyes that burn my soul,
What have I done to deserve such punishment,
For it is so much pain,
To love someone who will never truely to be mine.
I don't want to feel this way anymore,
For I have felt so bad since last October,
I've felt so bad about my emotions,
But now my will to prevent them,
Is now too weak and it's beginning to collapse,
I know I mustn't feel these things,
But he makes it so impossible not to.
With his pert soft lips,
And gleam in his eyes when he stares at me,
Those eyes that stare with such passion,
Delicate touch and sensual smile,
And such a tease in every possible way!
I'm tired of hiding how I feel,
I don't want to be a bad person,
Believe me I don't!
But no matter how hard I try,
I just can't close the door,
On these strong flames of passion raging inside me,
He satisfies my hunger,
And knows how to tame this fire,
Why can't I get him out of my head!!
If only he knew how much I love him,
Maybe he would stop this torture....
Author notes
prompt 1 - myself going mad slowly over time...falling for a married man...
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I guess most of us are destined to go through such a craze at least once in our lives - thank you for this entry and especially for writing something for the contest on global warming to meet the double challenge. Though you don't have enough greens to advance to the finalist list, I'm happy to have had a chance to read your entries.
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Congrats on the gold trophy... that's a horrible situation to be in. I am married and have never really been in any kind of pickle like this and I hope everything works out for you. This was really great and well written. Good luck in the contest.
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Falling for a married man is always a dangerous thing. I have never found myself in this situation, but I have had people be interested in me whilst I've been going out with a guy when we were very serious. Sometimes I found them attractive, but at the end of the day I loved my man. I think he's being the big player, as he's got something to lose and isn't showing any respect to you or the woman that he's married to. I'm sorry to hear things are hard to deal with, but one day it may catch up on you . . . Be careful and maybe do what you think may hurt you, because in the long run this probably will do.
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Wow.
This was amazing.
So deep and dark
and I love your trasparency,
even with it being so forbidden.
I love how you describe your
feelings so vividly
to make us understand
your frustration.
I love how your changes in emotion.
Great job.
Thank you for your participation.
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wow great write...i really enjoyed reading this
i like it because it can be about a teacher or maybe just a random fellow (o.O im in a weird mood today) thats "off limits" i really like this
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many thanks for your comment xx
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Going insane for love
I like it!
Great job
Pined your point
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not really what i was looking for, good write and all but nothing what i was looking for...
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When sweet love goes so wrong it a terrible shame. The no such thing as forever. I am sorry for your pain. It very healing to write them down. I hope you are doing well and moving on.. My mother advice, a well lived life is the best revenge going on and doing good things with your life. I like how you took hard emotions and turn them into something concrete.
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Beautiful
So emotional and sad, how hard it must be to feel like that. I would imagine that some will relate to it very well indeed. Good luck in the contest! -
That must really be a torture for you, to long for someone that you know you may never have, but knowing that they can satisfy your every need... Its a heartache and a half, that it is. Sorry for your pain, hope all gets better for you. Good write and good luck.
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Wonderful
That was emotion-filled. I liked it though, and I am glad to have read it.
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this poem was really good.
good job with it
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thank you! xx
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His has so much raw emotiong in it. Its beautiful how much you poured your heart into this. I loved it. I could feel your pain. Great write. I &heartsl it!!
Keep it up
-Mrs.Classix
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thanks for writing to me again Mrs. Classix, I tried my best to put everything into this write to get my point accross - u can't help who u fall for. And even if you like an older person who may be married, if they are attracted to u, it becomes even harder to prevent your emotionsf rom developing further.
thanks again E.L XX
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good and raw...
...emotion in this write and I suspect familar to alot of people at some point in their lives,though not morally right, I understand how these things can come about.serious stuff here.
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tbh this is what I am going thro atm, so this write is very important to me, as its something I can't stop feeling!! ARGH! I know its terrible but sometimes you just can't help who you fall for which is something I hoped to portray here in this write.
thanks again for taking the time to write to me
E.L XX
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