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the dawn before

descend
reassemble
the pieces
will never
fit right
again

now we all fit into boxes
the sweetest
contortion
forces
the motor running
in ignorance
addicted
to the bliss

sirens
whisper their songs
to ears
deafened
by water

this must be
what it is to melt

collapse
into the arms
of betrayal
flood
the engine
until it breaks


i'm addicted to the bliss

 

 

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until the day when dawn greets dusk

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  • stasis
    October 20, 2008

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    wow...

    this is so beautiful! i loved every single word in it, it was like i was being gravitated to the bottom of the page... this is the first poem i've read of yours, and i must say, i'm already hooked. excellent, excellent write!

    ♣ Tegan


  • fangs to blame
    October 13, 2008
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    Beautifully written i'm pleased that i read this.