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Your Eyes

When I look in your eyes
I feel stronge yet still I get weak
I feel happy and still I tremble
I see all that I am and everything I'm not
I see all that I can be and everything you need

When I look in your eyes
I forget all I ever was before us
I see only the future the way it should be
I see all I have ever wanted and so much more
And I see all I have ever and will ever need

all when I look in your eyes

A.L.R.

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for the one who has changed my life in so many ways....

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  • sublimewriter
    September 12, 2007

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    wow, what a beautiful poem. i like how you wrote how you felt and saw in the first stanza. when i look from how you see someone's eyes, i'm left in awe.


  • Sonja
    September 10, 2007

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    For you and your poetry only applauses, for your future my best wishes dear friend. I simply must use your own words to point again to this heart of poetry.
    ~
    When I look in your eyes
    I forget all I ever was before us
    ~
    ~Sonja~


    • MYownFreedom
      September 10, 2007
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      My dear Sonja, thank you so much for your kind words they mean so very much to me.. and thanks for your best wishes Amy