Anything, ask me anything.
I’ll tell all:
How many times I would die for you.
(Feline declarations)
How much pain I would endure for you.
How many times I would kill you,
Make your belly a playground for the maggots.
You, my worst memory—
My guiltiest pleasure—
Best friend—
Most worthy opponent.
Folly, sacrifice, and tremendous obstacle.
Author notes
4)Unusual love poems, nothing run of the mill, no "I love you and I know you love me too!"
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very interesting peice. I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
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Actually this by no means sucks! it is a vivid well written poem. I got where you wanted to take me and was lead there not dragged by the hair. BUT... it is still not a poem for beginners, as they tend to shy from to much metaphor, concerned they might misinterpperate the meaning. The SIMPLE is lost but KEEP the poem it is wonderful.
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I think I understand.
It's like Sherlock Holmes and that lady he was so fond of. She was an adversary but he held her in high esteem and thought of her more often, I think, than we will ever know. He seemed to admire her ability to in some ways outwit him. I hope you continue to write poetry.
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