Soaring freely without a care
Through the sky in the fresh air.
With fire in the soul
And freedom in rock'n'roll.
I don't care what others say
For they are far away
From what I can say.
They don't have to judge
'Cause I have fudge
And they misjudge my fudge.
So now before you leave
Think about this and believe.
To judge is to belittle yourself
And then no one wants to be by themselves.
A contest entry
- Phoenix by Jfd.
300 points, ended September 11, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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The rhyme was a little distracting for me when I reached the fudge part, but other then that great take on the prompt ! Thanks for entering
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cool, I like.
Especally the freedom of rocknroll part.
great poem vampire of the forest village! Good luck! keep it up!
*Peace*
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