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Self Awareness

crosslegged, determined,
Ashram stranger,
seeking clarity
forcing thoughts to scurry
lest they cloud perfection

feeling, hoping
something somewhere,
an external force,
will douse the fiery flames
sparked by memories unbidden
with cooling peaceful waters

realizing peace is not the
absence of cognition,
but rather examination
and ultimately
forgiveness of self



A contest entry

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  • Griswold silver member
    September 10, 2007

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    Very well done for this quickie contest and a great job on garnering the silver for it. Good one....Scott


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    September 9, 2007
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    beautifully written and expressed. great work Hugs, Bunny


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 9, 2007
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    AGAIN another fine piece of poetry, good luck ..MM